Conquering IB Mandarin B SL Writing: Analysis of Wrting Task 1 in 2019 Exam

IB Chinese B poses some difficulties for Chinese learner. Today, we will explore the first question of the May 2019 exam to explore the methods of writing.

Writing approach analysis:

Firstly, the introductory paragraph should serve as a transition, discussing the current situation and people’s perspectives on outer beauty and inner beauty,can also elaborating on the significance of outer and inner beauty in today’s society.

The topic requires the exploration of “cultural diversity” and the clear expression of one’s viewpoint, either in agreement or disagreement, along with the reasons for that stance. Therefore, it is essential to first establish one’s perspective. If in agreement, it is important to explain the significance of outer and inner beauty for an individual.

For instance, outer beauty can provide more social and career opportunities, while inner beauty can help a person have a foothold  in society and gain the trust of others. However, both are indispensable, and a balance of both is required for success in today’s society. If in disagreement, it is vital to first articulate which aspect is considered more important, followed by the reasons.

For example, if one believes that inner beauty is more important, it is necessary to explain why they prioritize inner beauty, such as the fact that even if a person is physically attractive, lacking in moral integrity, not abiding by laws and regulations, and frequently engaging in actions that harm others,it is difficult for them to gain a foothold in society.

If you places greater emphasis on outer beauty, you should also express your perspective, such as how outer appearance is a person’s business card, and in the absence of outer beauty, others may not be inclined to discover their inner qualities,will make people stay away from them.Pay attention to controlling the number of words.

However, regardless of agreement or disagreement, it is crucial to center our discussion around the theme of “cultural diversity.” This means highlighting the varying levels of emphasis on inner and outer beauty in different cultures.

Emphasis we must embrace the diverse interpretations of inner and outer beauty within different cultural with a mindset of inclusivity, openness, and equality,accepting the differences between individuals, we can cultivate a balanced perspective on inner and outer beauty.

Below is a sample essay based on the above analysis:

         在当今社会,外在美和内在美成为一个备受争议的话题。有人认为外在美是吸引力的源泉,而内在美则是个人品质的体现。然而,在我看来,外在美和内在美同样重要,因为它们在文化多样性中发挥着不可或缺的作用。

         首先,外在美是我们向世界展示自己的一种方式。外表的整洁、仪态的优雅以及自信的外在形象可以给人留下深刻的第一印象。在社交互动和职业发展中,外在美能够为我们赢得机会和提供更广阔的选择。它是一种表达个人风格和个性的方式,能够增强自信心并带来积极的社会反馈。

         然而,在外在美之外,内在美才是真正塑造一个人的核心。内在美是指个人的品德、价值观、智慧和善良。它体现了我们的真实自我,并影响着我们与他人建立深层次的联系。内在美是一个人的思想、情感和行为的综合体现,它决定了我们的行为方式、人际关系和对他人的影响力。

         文化多样性使我们能够超越外貌的表面评判,更加注重内在美的重要性。不同文化对美的定义和价值观存在差异,有些文化更注重外在美,而有些文化更注重内在美。我们应该尊重这些差异,以包容的心态去理解和欣赏不同的审美观念。

        因此,在文化多样性的背景下,外在美和内在美同样重要。它们互为补充,共同构成一个人完整的形象。外在美可以帮助我们在社交和职业领域中脱颖而出,而内在美则是持久的、真实的美,能够塑造我们的品格和人格魅力。只有平衡发展外在美和内在美,我们才能展现出最真实、最完整的自我。

         在这个美丽多元的世界中,我们应该尊重和欣赏每个人的外在美和内在美。让我们努力营造一个平等、包容和理解的社会,推崇个体的独特之处,并以平衡的眼光看待外在美和内在美的双重魅力。

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